The six sentences I chose are from my March 2012 release with Muse It Up Publishing. The Burning Seal is the first book in a paranormal series that has a psychic, demon, witch and elements of reincarnation. Let me provide you with a little background for the sentences below. A masked man has broken into Detective Danni Keegan's home and with his invasion he has unlocked her psychic abilities and spurred her to take her place in a battle she never imagined...
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An eerie silence pervaded her house. Even the walls breathed a warning. The concerned operator continued to ask questions while a second round of adrenaline coursed through her and sent her body on a roller coaster ride. The room shrunk as her vision narrowed and the only noise she heard now was the blood careening through her body. Her already tense muscles ached as they pulled even tighter.
He's coming back.
Very Nice!--Rachel Firasek
ReplyDeleteVery tense. Great six. Pulls you right in.
ReplyDeleteI was anxious reading this excerpt. Great job of leaving us wanting more!
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone else. Six powerful sentences.
ReplyDeleteMM the Queen of English
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Great cliff hanger! Keeps us readers wondering what will happen next. I'm dying to know who HE is.
ReplyDeleteLawna
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Oh, I like this! It leaves me wanting more. And the suspense is building wonderfully in only 6 sentences.
ReplyDeleteGood choice to include in your post. :)
Great suspense, intriguing. I want more.
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